JB Rodríguez Aguilar has written a lyrical novella about the 2020 pandemic, Canyonlands: A Quarantine Ballad, and María Martínez Moreno and I translated it into English. It goes on sale today at Olympia Publishers and at Amazon.

It tells the story of an American photojournalist on his way home in March 2020 to his family in Chicago. Instead, the Covid-19 pandemic spreads, and he finds himself quarantined in a hotel room in Madrid, Spain. As he watches the statistics of illness and death rise, he retreats into memories of a trip years ago to a North American landscape that was a milestone in his career: Canyonlands National Park in Utah. This leads to a philosophic and personal chronicle of isolation.

JB is a talented photographer, and the book includes a photo essay of Canyonlands, a wilderness carved through layers of stone by the Colorado River and its tributaries.

An excerpt from the first section, in the hotel in Madrid:

…The sun set shortly after, forming a halo of crimsons, oranges, pinks and purples stenciled on the clouds. It was as if those cotton threads were suddenly splattered by the palette of an impressionist painter. He was used to reporting on such luminous landscapes, but the truth was he did not remember such intense sunsets in almost any other big city he had visited. At the same time, the afternoon was both an end and a beginning. It was the confirmation of the end of certain freedoms — for him and everyone in Spain — as well as the start of a new, vital next phase. Their new lives would be nourished by new rituals, like looking out from a balcony and clapping. Windows and balconies were called on to become the main elements of contact with the outside world and, because of that, they imposed a new order as well. They offered access to light and this, in turn, ordered the passage of time. The sunset came to symbolize the completion of each of the coming days.…

For me, first drafts come hard. I’ve heard of writers who love them, but that might be an urban legend. I have a hard-learned opinion about first drafts.

First drafts have only one duty to fulfill: They must exist. They don’t need to be good. Mine don’t necessarily achieve coherence. In fact, I like to think of them as “zero drafts,” more of an experiment than an actual draft.

This saves me from the temptation to rewrite as I go, which I advise against. Rewriting can lead to getting stuck rewriting and re-rewriting the beginning, trying to perfect every sentence. Writers who do that may never get all the way to “The End.” But until the end is written, there’s no way to know exactly what the beginning needs. Even the most careful planner and outliner will discover changes in the story as it goes on.

In my first drafts — even as I plan first drafts — sometimes I get stuck. One tool that helps me is my friend Zack Jeffries’ writing prompt book, Break Through to “The End”. He intentionally designed it to use while starting an outline or first draft, writing the draft, or revising it.

What makes these prompts useful, I believe, is that they’re open-ended. Some prompts try to suggest an idea for story: “You’re looking into a bottomless pit. Describe your reactions three days later.” “A mistranslation of ‘weapons’ and ‘equipment’ causes an inappropriate shipment of goods.” (If you want ideas-based prompts, I recommend visiting PostSecret.)

Jeffries assumes you have a ton of ideas. He encourages you, instead, to wonder “What would happen if…” as a means to discover a new aspect of your story. For example, at one point, your character is going to make decisions that will have repercussions. He prompts:

“What would happen in your current scene or next scene if your main or perspective character wondered whether a decision they made was the wrong one? Is this a way to pull up the emotional strings of your reader? Is this a way you can reinforce what’s important to your main character? Can you show the reader what the main characters’ expectations are?”

Character arcs, relationships, plot, world-building, and theme — I can explore as I need in Jeffries’ book. For me, this is one more practical tool to help me get through the struggle of the first draft.

If you’re a writer, what are the tools that get you through the hardest parts?

As you may know, many of the characters in the novel Dual Memory are named after tulips because the novel was vaguely inspired by the tulip bubble in Holland in the 1630s.

In my novel, Miss Fanny Kemble is an artist driven out of a shared studio by a jealous rival.

The flower called Miss Fanny Kemble is a “broken” tulip from the early 1830s praised as the finest tulip ever produced in England. 

The tulip was named after a popular young actress, Fanny Kemble, born into a British theater family in 1809. She toured the United States in the 1830s performing Shakespeare and became so popular that other women copied her hairstyle.

In 1834, she married an American, then discovered that he was an heir to a plantation in Georgia. She was repelled by the slavery there, and the marriage didn’t last long, but she recorded the “simple horror” of what she saw and published a book, Journal of a Residence on a Georgian Plantation in 1838-1839. It helped cement European support for the Union in the Civil War.

Works about her include the biography Fanny Kemble’s Civil Wars by Catherine Clinton, published by Oxford University Press. Photo from public domain.

I’ll be at Windycon, Chicagoland’s longest running science fiction convention this weekend, November 10 to 12. Usually about 1,000 members attend. This is an all-volunteer fan-run event, more intimate than mega-conventions, and everyone gets a chance to have fun and conversations with friends and special guests. You can join at the door. It will be held at the DoubleTree Hotel in Oakbrook, Illinois, a suburb of Chicago.

This year’s theme: Adventure Is Out There. We’ll have an art show, charity drive, dealers room, gaming, amateur radio broadcast at W9W, workshops, cosplay, theater, music, concerts, panels, science presentations, snacks, beer, and parties. If you see me, say hi!

Here’s my schedule:

Writer’s Workshop, Saturday, 9:00 a.m. to 12:00 noon. A critique-session workshop, usually with doughnuts (thanks, Rich!), prior registration required.

SETI Protocols, Saturday, 2:00 to 3:00 p.m., York Room. What are the protocols for alien contact? A lot of people and organizations, such as NASA, have put serious thought into this. We’ll discuss their intractable questions and try to come up with reasonable answers. Sue Burke; J. Taylor, moderator.

The Many Types of Fantasy, Saturday, 8:00 to 9:00 p.m. Ogden Room. From high fantasy to low fantasy — and let’s not forget the popular epic fantasy. Who determines the meaning of these distinctions? Are they different? How many kinds of fantasy are there? Let us count the ways… Richard Chwedyk, R. Garfinkle, Z Jeffries, Angeli Primlani; Sue Burke, moderator.

The Obligatory Dr. Who Panel: Good-Bye Rubber Suits, Sunday, 11:00 a.m. to 12:00 noon, Hunt Room. Has it lost its nostalgic charm since the special effects are better? P. Hahn, J. Skwarski; Sue Burke, moderator (but I have opinions!).

What if you could adopt rescue dragons the way you can adopt rescue dogs? Who would do the adopting? How? Where?

These questions led to my story “The Virgin Who Rescues Dragons” in NewMyths Anthologies Volume 4: The Cosmic Muse. It just came out, and you can buy it through this link:

https://books2read.com/b/br6Z67

I drew inspiration for my story from The Tough Guide to Fantasyland by Diana Wynne Jones. That book is a parody of tourist guidebooks, and it lists the common tropes of fantasy fiction. I studied up on Dragons, Virgins, Evil Mages, Boy Kings, Dark Lords, and Foreboding Castles, then added a few Compelling Motivations, Backstories, and Inner Conflicts — and soon, I had a fun tale to tell.

The Cosmic Muse will give you 40 stories and poems involving magic or expressing awe at the universe, with cover art by Fiona Meng, its third eye promising insight and inspiration. I’m excited to be included among so many impressive authors.

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OTHER NEWS:

André Santana has been nominated for Best Science Fiction Audiobook Narration for Dual Memory by SOVAS, the Society of Voice Arts and Sciences. Congratulations André! The winner will be announced December 10.

Alex Kingsley has reviewed Dual Memory for Ancillary Review of Books, and I think they explain wonderfully the role of art and artists for both humans and AIs in the novel. Beautiful Things We Weren’t Supposed to Make: Review of Dual Memory by Sue Burke